Author: Serafine Laveaux
Publisher: Stormy Night Publications
ASIN: B00D0G5RW2
Pages: 173/42
Genre: Erotic Romance
Rating: 2 **Stars
Publisher: Stormy Night Publications
ASIN: B00D0G5RW2
Pages: 173/42
Genre: Erotic Romance
Rating: 2 **Stars
Josey Tate has always felt like a little girl lost in a grown-up world.
She has muddled through for years, but her unhappiness with her body,
her work, and her life in general have continued to build, and when her
boss suggests that she make an appointment with a man by the name of Mr.
Green—telling Josey only that the appointment can help turn her life
around—she decides she has nothing to lose.
Expecting a weight-loss or self-help clinic, Josey is surprised when Mr. Green promises to match her with a “daddy”. She is far more shocked the next day when, after having disobeyed all of his instructions, she finds herself back in Mr. Green’s office for a long, hard, bare bottom spanking from Richard Black, her new daddy. Before she knows it, Josey finds herself blushing red as she is bathed, intimately examined, and dressed as a little girl.
Josey soon learns that motivation and discipline are only the beginning of what a firm daddy can provide, and under Richard’s strict but loving guidance she blossoms in a way she never would have thought possible. Even as she comes to love her new life, though, she realizes that she needs much more from Richard than just a few days a week together… she desperately needs her loving daddy to claim her as his little girl forever.Josey Tate has always felt like a little girl lost in a grown-up world. She has muddled through for years, but her unhappiness with her body, her work, and her life in general have continued to build, and when her boss suggests that she make an appointment with a man by the name of Mr. Green—telling Josey only that the appointment can help turn her life around—she decides she has nothing to lose.
Expecting a weight-loss or self-help clinic, Josey is surprised when Mr. Green promises to match her with a “daddy”. She is far more shocked the next day when, after having disobeyed all of his instructions, she finds herself back in Mr. Green’s office for a long, hard, bare bottom spanking from Richard Black, her new daddy. Before she knows it, Josey finds herself blushing red as she is bathed, intimately examined, and dressed as a little girl.
Josey soon learns that motivation and discipline are only the beginning of what a firm daddy can provide, and under Richard’s strict but loving guidance she blossoms in a way she never would have thought possible. Even as she comes to love her new life, though, she realizes that she needs much more from Richard than just a few days a week together… she desperately needs her loving daddy to claim her as his little girl forever.
Expecting a weight-loss or self-help clinic, Josey is surprised when Mr. Green promises to match her with a “daddy”. She is far more shocked the next day when, after having disobeyed all of his instructions, she finds herself back in Mr. Green’s office for a long, hard, bare bottom spanking from Richard Black, her new daddy. Before she knows it, Josey finds herself blushing red as she is bathed, intimately examined, and dressed as a little girl.
Josey soon learns that motivation and discipline are only the beginning of what a firm daddy can provide, and under Richard’s strict but loving guidance she blossoms in a way she never would have thought possible. Even as she comes to love her new life, though, she realizes that she needs much more from Richard than just a few days a week together… she desperately needs her loving daddy to claim her as his little girl forever.Josey Tate has always felt like a little girl lost in a grown-up world. She has muddled through for years, but her unhappiness with her body, her work, and her life in general have continued to build, and when her boss suggests that she make an appointment with a man by the name of Mr. Green—telling Josey only that the appointment can help turn her life around—she decides she has nothing to lose.
Expecting a weight-loss or self-help clinic, Josey is surprised when Mr. Green promises to match her with a “daddy”. She is far more shocked the next day when, after having disobeyed all of his instructions, she finds herself back in Mr. Green’s office for a long, hard, bare bottom spanking from Richard Black, her new daddy. Before she knows it, Josey finds herself blushing red as she is bathed, intimately examined, and dressed as a little girl.
Josey soon learns that motivation and discipline are only the beginning of what a firm daddy can provide, and under Richard’s strict but loving guidance she blossoms in a way she never would have thought possible. Even as she comes to love her new life, though, she realizes that she needs much more from Richard than just a few days a week together… she desperately needs her loving daddy to claim her as his little girl forever.
Serafine Laveaux was born in a rural community in the middle of
nowhere, the red headed daughter of a preacher and the choir director.
Her first loves were always horses, writing and reading, but when a spur
of the moment submission to an erotica anthology was accepted she
realized perhaps there was more to at least one of her passions than the
occasional scribbling.
Now residing in rural Texas, her past times include collecting art, gardening, and designing the ultimate zombie apocalypse survival vehicle. She also enjoys sleeping late, Daryl Dixon, and avoiding housework.
Now residing in rural Texas, her past times include collecting art, gardening, and designing the ultimate zombie apocalypse survival vehicle. She also enjoys sleeping late, Daryl Dixon, and avoiding housework.
In this story, you follow Josey Tate. A little girl stuck in an adult's
body. She struggles to maintain everyday life because she wants to be
carefree. Her boss notices this and suggests she makes an appointment
with Mr. Green.
Mr. Green remains a mystery throughout this story, you never really get a look into the company he works for or the business he maintains. He evaluates Josey and sets her up with a Daddy, Richard Black. She only meets this Daddy nightly and doesn't get to see him outside of the building.
We don't get into Richards head too much, we get small snippets here and there. I think it's essential when reading a Dom/sub story to get inside both characters heads. To know how he is feeling as well as she is. He is growing in this story as well so I think we should have been able to get inside his head more.
There wasn't a lot of age play to me which I think there should have been more of because we are shown that Josey is very much a little girl. I felt like this story was a great concept but executed poorly. I would love to hear more about Josey's past and more about Mr. Green's company. I love a good build up, lots of detail leading into the story and knowing where our characters came to be. It was a great concept, I would have just liked more.
Mr. Green remains a mystery throughout this story, you never really get a look into the company he works for or the business he maintains. He evaluates Josey and sets her up with a Daddy, Richard Black. She only meets this Daddy nightly and doesn't get to see him outside of the building.
We don't get into Richards head too much, we get small snippets here and there. I think it's essential when reading a Dom/sub story to get inside both characters heads. To know how he is feeling as well as she is. He is growing in this story as well so I think we should have been able to get inside his head more.
There wasn't a lot of age play to me which I think there should have been more of because we are shown that Josey is very much a little girl. I felt like this story was a great concept but executed poorly. I would love to hear more about Josey's past and more about Mr. Green's company. I love a good build up, lots of detail leading into the story and knowing where our characters came to be. It was a great concept, I would have just liked more.
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